Life And Love

Life And Love

A Poem by Poetic Injustice
"

My motto. My devotion.

"

We make of it what we will

We will of it what we make

And in doing we instill

For posterity all our mistakes

But all our successes, as well

Love won, love lost, love returned

Be it heaven or be it hell

Some forever, some spurned

But the heart rots if left unused

Even if we achieve longevity

Better for it to be abused

Than kept under lock and key

© 2009 Poetic Injustice


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That was cute! Could the word captivity been used in the last sentence? "Better for it to be abused
Than kept under captivity". It's just me I'm sure.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These two should go together. One is meaningless without the other. They're like interdependent with each other. I so agree with this. This is just beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I sooooooooooo agree. Well done. Thanks again
Babsie xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully stated!!! I really enjoyed your poem! Thank You for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"But the heart rots if left unused
Even if we achieve longevity
Better for it to be abused
Than kept under lock and key"

Amen.

Well said, very true, and words of wisdom that we all should listen to, and practice.







Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree, but believe it or not, there are some that don't agree and rather not "feel" at all.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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