The Outlook: A Two Sided Sword

Raindrops falling from a grey clouded sky, impartially soaking pavement, soil, and concrete alike.  The damp mist masked treetops and roofs from eyes’ sight.  A bland day in my mind but a day nonetheless.  The very nature of my existance is to enjoy this day with fascites of disposition, the good and ill.  So, since it be going against my better half not to do so, I choose so with glea and an outlook in HD.   

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kim's Poems]

quite an intersting piece, I really like this.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Lovely writing!
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She..
God bless you..
Lucky!

[J.D. Pine]

You're right! I did not realize the errors. Thank for the review

[Nobody.]

I think it's a nice prose poem. the language chosen fits, the descriptions are crisp and clear and it says something. There are a few spelling issues, but nothing spell-check won't clear up. Overall, good poem.
Cheers!
R.G.

[Voice11]

hmm..This was interesting. I liked it but I dont thin its really my style. Good job though

[Fanciful Goddess]

love it! .I love you wordings .
hey lets be friends?! k?

[Jessica]

good job it flows very well. great imagery but i would recomment spacing out the lines rather than bunching it up into a paragraph beacuse it is a very good poemmmm! i liked it alot and i thought it was funny in the end when you said HD

[Akina]

great written. I like the flow in it.
good job, keep it up!

Akina