A Meditation On Autumn

A Meditation On Autumn

A Poem by DAH

Within the orange colored mist

from the air’s autumn aura

floating leaves sail the moisture

 

the ground has broken into pumpkins

© 2019 DAH


Author's Note

DAH
©dah / dahlusion 2012 all rights reserved

from my second book: The Second Coming (Stillpoint Press, 2012)
with a foreword by poetry teacher, Ron Peat, MA

https://www.amazon.com/Second-Coming-Dah/dp/0982874715/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1441386175&sr=1-1&keywords=the+second+coming+%2F+dah

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Makes me want to break out the hoodie, although here in phoenix, probably not quite time yet. This evokes that subtle change in the quality of light that comes with autumn. Also the smell of new tough skin jeans for back to school and and the lace of impending romance, at least for me. Really awesome write, it did its job for sure.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DAH

1 Year Ago

I'm happy that this one pleases you, Crowley, and does the job for you.

Cheers,
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I love thinking of Autumn's color as an aura.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DAH

3 Months Ago

Thank you!
The magic of Autumn! soon it will be snow falling . . . even now in Kentucky.
T

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This paints a miraculous picture in my mind, DAH. Thank you for creating such a simple yet immaculate masterpiece.
-Shoshana

Posted 1 Year Ago


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DAH

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Shoshana!
A lovely piece of seasonal brevity. A nice place to hang out in ... this poem:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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DAH

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Pryde!
Indeed those magical autumn mists that act as a backdrop for the light and colours to play us out of summer captured in words DAH

Posted 1 Year Ago


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DAH

1 Year Ago

Thank you, John!
a wonderful meditation, Autumn is my favourite time of year for wandering the forest, nothing to do with magic mushroom season, lol,

Posted 1 Year Ago


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DAH

1 Year Ago

Thank you, gram!
Ah, Mother Nature and her brush dipped in autumn orange! Truly original, DAH.

Posted 1 Year Ago


DAH

1 Year Ago

Thank you, RE!
Love your use of orange & pumpkin colors (implying everything in between). Third line is sublime in its dynamic simplicity. Your last line is rowdy with uninhibited imagery! Your meditation definitely rinses us with autumn's aura! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


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DAH

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Margie!
I just returned from the Outer Banks. Heading north through the mountains of West Virginia I was surprised with the number of pumpkins filling the fruit stands. The leaves are starting to turn ... the air is getting crisp ... and your words elicit that sense of the approaching change of season.

A season I enjoy as I do your poem.
Well done, DAH

Posted 1 Year Ago


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DAH

1 Year Ago

Yes to those Autumnal changes!

Thank you, Ted!

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