Dear Mum

Dear mum

What have you done to my mind?

I can’t seem to but my feelings for you behind

Like I cannot not forget what you did

I was an only little kid

I can’t get you out of my head

These are the feelings I dread

My heart still loves you it doesn’t matter if you don’t love me still

A cry nearly everyday

Since you passed away

End of the day you our my mum

Either if I like it or not

Because you the one that gave birth

But why couldn’t you see how much it worth

Just wanted you to know

That some feelings do show

Maybe you was scared of dad

If you didn’t do it, it made him mad

But I was your son

And you was my mum

Why didn’t you save me?

Why did you not make effort to see?

Is that why you left the abuse be

But you had your time to glance

That was your chance

Mum it over and done

I have a new mum

And I can finally be a son

But I will always love you and I have never stopped

But the memories cannot be dropped

So rip 

That was end of my speech

 

 

 

Reviews

[mamabear]

Darling Dalebear,

This poem is sooooooooooooooooooo well written. You are an amazing poet and an amazing boy, you have a hell of a lot to offer the world......................just watch this space!!!!!

You are a brilliant writer and you will show the world not only your wonderful talent but you will make people aware of the care system here in the United Kingdom and how things have to changed. You will be a hero to children all over the World Dalebear. A leader for the children, someone for them to look up to. You will aspire children and adults alike. You can and you will make a difference to soooooooooooooooooooooo many lives Dalebear.

Your biological mother was give a beautiful wonderful gift of you, her son. She chose to abuse you and she allowed that man your biological father to abuse you too. She could have left at anytime taking you and herself to safety. But remember she chose to stay with your biological monster instead.
That was the biggest mistake she could have ever made, and she lost you, her precious precious beautiful son.
I understand why you want her to a victim too. Maybe she was but she still allowed your biological dad to try and kill you on more than on one occasion!
I am sorry Dalebear I have tried so hard to find some compassion for her but she could have helped kill you. I am sorry baby boy.
my favourite part of your poem is

"I have a new mum
And I can finally be a son"

I think those two lines are perfect, absolutely perfect. Just like you!!!!!!!

Thank you for sharing this poem and all your other poems with myself and with the world too.
Your place in the world is a valued and treasured one Dalebear.

I love you Dalebear, my new son,

Mamabear xxxxxxx

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. i agree with mamabear ... she said it perfectly ... and her favourite lines are my favourite lines too ... :) ... you sure are a hero ... :) ...