Abandoned Zone

 

I’m still going through all this pain

All the heartache strain

I feel I am hated

From which you both have stated

You made me see my own death

Where I couldn’t feel my breath

How you made me banish

I am ready to disappear and vanish

I’m just spiralling down

Closely to my tears I slowly drown

I just my vulnerable state

Maybe it’s just my fate

Or is it injustice to feel like this

My care you had to remiss

I just feel so sad

I wish I didn’t feel this bad

What the hell is the matter?

To make my heart went to splatter

My heart feels like a broken vase

I rather live in mars

In this hell I’m sitting alone

In the abandoned zone

 

 

  

Reviews

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you feel the pain
and you flinch
you feel the pain
in every inch

you feel the pain
like it'd never end
you feel the pain
like it's a deadend

you feel the pain
and you hate it
you feel the pain
and narrate it

you must and it is your right
it is your only road to respite

you write of it intensely
and it hurts immensely

your words are brilliant
soaked in sentiment

you have gone through hell
and i can truly always tell

we'll put the broken vase together
and then we'll all gather

and sing for others in pain
so they have less strain

god knows they need us to
to stop them from feeling blue

you are brave and mighty strong
plus you could do no wrong

you're a rockstar with so much style
oh, you make my heart glow and smile

that broken vase needs to have flowers
and lots of love in mighty showers

and when we're soaked in love
we'll have heaven here and above

we'll fly and conquer the skies
and give the sky all our cries

our pain, our shadows, and nightmares too
you'll rock this world, yes you and only you

just a few more years
and goodbye to tears and fears

. and i agree with every word em said ... you're sheer awesomeness, your awesomeness ... a genius poet and artist and human being ...

[em]

- oh dearest dale - your words are filled with such searing pain that they make me tear up - you're truly an inspirational, brave poet - it takes a lot of courage to write so honestly - and you're just incredibly gifted!!
- you never could - and never would be hated - that'd never ever happen - they hurt you - not because of you - but because of the monsters they are - and none of it is your fault - i know it feels otherwise at times - and i can understand - because i have my scars too - but i cannot say this enough - none of it is your fault - or ever was. - and there is no shame in this pain - in feeling it - or expressing it - or the tears - it takes courage to feel pain - and to live it - and then to live through it - and you're the most courageous person i know!!
- this is a song of a warrior who knows his scars - and feels them - because that's the warrior who wins this war - this is dark vs light - and your light - i have no doubt in my mind whatsoever - is the winner - it is - and it will be.