Land of Misery

a whole new world

In the land of misery.....
I found it all.........
where love hurts as hell.....
where sadness is the utmost spell......
and tears are the light , the sun and the shell......

Where sorrow has the call .......
from birth.....till the last fall ........

Where grief is bless......
mourning daily...and no less.....
heaven or hell ? there's no address....

where broken hearts ......
and much older scars.......
for no healing it seeks.......
only a space to breach.......

when so crowded it become.......
It had to throw some......
for new souls to overcome.....
and try to light the torch inside the dead and the numb......

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

"and try to light the torch inside the dead and the numb......" ending gave me chills really great poetry made your feelings clear and identified with me thanx for sharing

[Dalia]

thank you for your lovely words Deron :)

[Renée]

A part of life..most try to ignore..but everyone faces..misery, grief, sorrow...you did a great job of capturing these and more.....yet there is a bit of light you end with..
you make a person really think with this piece.. You did well ( :

[Dalia]

thank you my friend, glad you think so of my writing :)

[Renée]

my pleasure ( :

[Annabelle Lee]

some suggestions

when so crowded it had become
-or-
when so crowded it becomes

Other than that, FANTASTIC!

[Dalia]

thank you for your precious notes Annabelle, I'll consider the change

[Purplerose]

Love this! You write sad beautiful. :)

[Dalia]

thank you for shining your lovely reviews on my poems Rose :)

[Jack...]

Dark yet light, hard yet soft, pleasing to the eye and the senses.

[Dalia]

your kind words do lift up my writing soul
thank you Jack

[Jack...]

You are very welcome and from what I can see your writing soul is very gifted indeed.

[Sami Khalil]

where broken hearts ......
and much older scars.......
for no healing it seeks.......
only a space to breach.......
My faves in this nice poem...:)

[Dalia]

thank you so much
glad you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did . You are welcome...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

We hv all visited this place at sometime. Nice picture painted.

[Dalia]

that's right, am ever so humbled
thanks for reading and reviewing John

[Chris]

Seems we live as we can, as best as we can ...as only - we can.

[Dalia]

yes we do !
thanks for reviewing Chris

[Chris]

I'm glad you're here - be safe

[Dalia]

I will
thanks :)

[khalid]

this is a very deep thinking of life and what it really means, people come and go only memories remain and even memories disappear after some time of our death..it is a crazy feeling when it comes to life and death simply because nobody has ever come back from this journey to tell us about what is there in that hidden place we are supposed to go to one day..

[Dalia]

very much right what you say my friend
Thanks for reviewing

[khalid]

my pleasure, welcome back

[ObscurityNone]

This is very well written; if the case is that you have not been writing for a very long time, you certainly have a natural talent.

[Dalia]

Thank you so much , am glad you think so,
Its right I only started writing very recently, let me know what do you think of the rest of my poems :)

[ObscurityNone]

Will do.