Like mine

Have you ever met an exact copy of yourself !

a shy smile .. like mine
the way you feel out .. you can't hide that
the simple soul .. the kindest heart
the sweet laugh .. the most delight
the boyhood that surrounds you .. is some how, here too

were we one soul before creation!
a one that departed to two in a world of separation
Is it why when I turn around I find you gazing
do you miss piece of soul, do you miss a beat

I know you are out of phrasing
because you find the sense of silence so divine
exactly like mine 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

A different kind opf idea i think. One soul One source of being

[Dalia]

glad you like it, thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it a lot :)

[Jack...]

Very open and peaceful at the same time. Nice.

[Dalia]

thank you Jack :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A almost childlike look at the union of sheer likeness, however in saying that, the wording capture a slight sophistication that is very pleasing, well done, good read.

[Dalia]

well, am not afraid to say that am childlike myself :P
but thank you for your kind words, glad you like it Thomas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome, keep writing.

[Dalia]

I will, thanks

[Sami Khalil]

A nice well written poem...:)

[Dalia]

thank you, glad you like it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Caitlynn Cusick]

very good... this resonates extremely well... i feel exactly the same way about someone... go check out my writing, and his... anthony armstrong... thanks for sharing

[Dalia]

Thank you , glad you like it
I will for sure :)