Think of hope

when I think of hope...

Don't think too much….

Please don't think that much…

Doubts takeover my brain…..

Unleashes my pain…..

Every thought evokes tears…

Every move arouses my fears…..

My head is fried…. too much I've cried….

Every sunk dream…..makes me shrug…. tear and drop..

Every night I die…..with the down I sigh….

A ghost I wake among the living……

With the coldest touch…. the most fragile….

With no hope that the dream….

Might come alive…. or beam….

Though dead inside…. it bleeds with every moon light…

As an autumn leaf am fallen…..

A ghost in the world of living…..

Don't think too much….

Please don't think that much…

Of what might…of what's right…

Of when my soul shall awake….

And leave these days so fake…..

Reviews

[Jack...]

I can't quite put my finger on it, but there is something about the way you write that enchants me. Maybe it is that each and every word seem so honest or perhaps pristine, white flowing glistening in the sun. Something, but I do know that I enjoy your poems immensely. Thank you for sharing.

[Dalia]

You just drew a true smile on my face, one I don't have to fake, am all humbled but overjoyed by the fact that you like my poems, thank you Jack :)

[Jack...]

Then upon my face you will find a smile now as well. I am happy I brought some joy into your world today. But please know, your poetry has allowed a similar joy into mine.

[Dalia]

good to know ^^

[Annabelle Lee]

what a mywterious piece. i liked it

[Dalia]

thanks Annabelle,, glad you did

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Quite magical and daring to the point of pleasure, well done, good read.

[Dalia]

thank you Thomas , glad you like it :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome

[Night]

...wow, I'm impressed, this was an honest and deep write, I liked this...nice.=) Oh, and by the way, I know exactly what you mean by 'Think too much"...been there,,,still there...lol.

[Dalia]

so happy to see your review my friend
yeah, thinking too much, a global issue :P

[Night]

...yup.=)