White Rapids (Poem)

Flowing like water around rocks eroded

The bends and the banks in this flow can't hold me

Filtering purer with every cold mile

Shifting weight

Energy in to a smile

This narrow way constricts release of flow

An increase in pressure, my white rapids show

As I crash in to and in between stone

I filter the dirt of the past claiming home

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

this write is metaphorically enriched with such profoundness, very insightful in regards in depicting how healing, the earth, nature,truly is. simply amazing poem! i really enjoy the originality in your writings and the fluidity weaved through-out them. thanks for sharing :)

[Damien Davison]

I appreciate all the reviews, I'm really happy you enjoy my writing. I literally saw the words 'white rapids' then made this lol. Thanks again!

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome! thank you for your lovely reviews upon my writings! oh yes, that's how i felt after i stared at that image on one of my writings "The Witches' Tree" - miss that feeling...keep writing :)

[Amanda]

This created a really nice image, i like it. Nice job! :)

[Damien Davison]

Thanks a lot Amanda! I appreciate it!

[}Echo{]

I really like this, it's really great. I love your style of writing, because they show your emotions and personality. Keep writing! :)

[Damien Davison]

Thank you for all the reviews and your interest in my writing!