I'll Hold Your Hand

This is for the Simple Words group and contest

I'll hold your hand,
when no one else is around,
I'll be there for you
when your world crashes down

I'll hold your hand
when  everything fails,
and I'll stick by you
until the end

I'll hold your hand
until all the darkness
and shadows of the past
pass over us

I'll hold your hand
just to feel
closer to you
when I have no one else to hold...

Author's Note

We had to use the word "Shadow" in our piece.

Reviews

[Aidz]

Simple but well written, good job

[CharlesMonroe]

This is beautiful Ta'Shandra (: I absolutlly adore how sweet and innocent this is. Amazing job (:

[angelina]

simple and beautiful :')

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

beautiful

[unknown]

Great indeed :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Great piece.

[Brittni]

I love this piece! your poetry moves and inspires me. It speaks to me and says alot about my life. You should be very proud.

[Audrey Howitt]

Good Job!! Tender and sweet and vulnerable!

[Teenage Romeo]

good

[brenda]

this is super good!!:)