Am I Blind ?

Am I Blind ?

A Poem by Tasha

Am I blind to not see
what is in front of me?
is it because I choose
not to see?

Am I blind for not
realizing that
I'm not the
only one...

I'm not the only one
that  fell in your trap,
to be caught in
your web of lies...

Am I blind to see
that you hurt
so many
other people,
I'm just a new addition
to the list,
a list no one
would ever want
to be on

Was I that blind
to let my emotions
get the best of me

I thought things were fine
then it suddenly hit me
that they weren't...

I was just to blind to realize it...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I don't know what the problem is, but it seems like everyone's having relationship problems. This is for another friend. I hope I can give her some good advice.

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I guess we all have relationship problems now and then.
I am sorry you have a friend going through this.
But that is what relationships are all about.
No relationship is perfect, we all go through hard times.
That is what makes a relationship stronger.
Sometimes we need to sit and be alone and think things through,
Sometimes you need to talk to through. Which ever is the easiest.
Love takes two...commucation is the key.
It may hurt and bring tears but the thing is you pull through together.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Yes we are often blind to what is right in front of us, I'm not sure why that is...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reminds me of what happened to me three years ago..... good work. :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kat
It sounds like it'd be for a relationship problem as a couple but this reminded me of a friend i use to have... grrr... just let it go we aren't fighting anymore but i can't trust her :/

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inspirational words, you seem like the elder all the children come to advice for in the village, and i mean that as a compliment. Another great piece ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, many can relate to this, i mean these guys' games are all the same. -.-" anyways, good write. something i can relate to a lot especially. (=

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They save love is blind...but I think its just insane. lol I love everybody the same, boys, girls, men women, dogs, cats...I only know one way to love. All that hormone and sex stupidity I never could figure out. But love...love is simple. Love is three things...hard work, responsibility and sacrifice. That's all it is. Why do people want to "fall in" hard work responsibilty and sacrifice? Insanity or stupidity are the two most likely candidates. lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm very sorry for any relationship problems, if you're having them :/
Very deep, hurt and sending a sad message. Relationships are hard.
Good poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem! It is bad for your friend, but perhaps her pain sparked something in you. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so powerful.... relationship problems are a part of life.... actually it kind of is life

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

None are so blind as those who will not see.
We often live in a constant state of denial
That clouds the truth and blinds the heart.

Excellent writing that exposes blind trust giving way to painfully emotional clear sight that smarts within the soul.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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