A Broken Record

A Broken Record

A Poem by Tasha
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Sadness is filled into the heart of two people that fell out of love, but can't seem to put the pieces back together.

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A love once
tainted,
with all
"the good hits"
is shattered
to the ground
like a
broken record,

It use to be
so strong,
the love
they had
and shared
for each other,
now  it
fell  apart,
and
fallen into
a million pieces,

A  million pieces
that grew  tired
of trying
to rekindle
something
that was
not
there
anymore,
now only a
fond memory..

A broken record
that
can't
be put
back
together
to
save
what they once had,
no matter
how hard
they tried

Only pictures
and the words
to their song
prevailed...

To live on
through
the destroyed
pieces

© 2011 Tasha


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i can sooooooooooooo relae to that but the guy was my best friend so it suced when we werent friends anymore and the girl he flirted with thinx its her fualt we broke up

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There isn't much to say except for the words that are already there.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice job as always!
This is my favorite part:

A million pieces
that grew tired
of trying
to rekindle
something
that was
not
there
anymore,
now only a
fond memory..



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I truly LOVE the way this is written, the way it's crafted, n' the way it's laid out on the page makes the fractured sentiments ring even TRUER! GREAT, GREAT STUFF!! ♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem I just love it. Sad but awesome! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats really good

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great metaphor and the way you spaced the lines resembled a broken record, good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wel done young lady a very kewl write indeed, great how you used the broken record

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful way to describe a broken love. the million pieces are vivid and strong. The last stanza sums up this poem nicely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

And so the song never played once more ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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