All By Myself

Let me go,

You're too much to handle

I'd rather be all by myself

Than to deal with you

And the constant fights

The yelling, the screaming

Its all to much

And I'm tired of it

So I'd rather be all by myself

Rather than listen to accusations

Goodbye...

Cause this girl is...

All by herself,

And its better than

Being with you

Reviews

[Joseph D. Smith]

I like the ellipses near the end, as it shows the bitter explosion of emotions! I really love this piece!

Keep up the wonderful work!

[Jace Rockland]

The last stanza was the nail in the coffin for me. Chilling! I love it.

[Linear]

Well now, there's a statement written boldly, anger I see but where is the love those deeper emotions expressed at the break up of a romance?

Spill your blood in writing :0)

Well written

[BrynnaW.]

I see the message you are sending. This was so sad! I like it! Good job and keep on writing!

[alternative_be]

The message is very clear and sometimes we do need to be on our own in order to recover!

[chaireinferrascalayca]

short yet concise...

[Jibin]

Sometimes letting go is better than to live with the head ache. An ordinary content, you made it alive and beautiful.
Love this write....

[Joshua Donahue]

Very short, but realistic to many girls who may be facing a similar problem. But I liked this and the honesty that you put into it. Nice work! :)

[stars are far]

oh that is so nice
loved it :)

[J Todd Underhill]

Empowering poem, the only thing that you need is you a self reliant poetess and nothing more. Great write and one to be admired!