Don't Hold Your Breath

I think you can figure it out.

Don't hold your breath for me,

Don't waste your time

It's over,

I'm done with you

Its too late to crawl back now,

It's too late to apologize

The damage has already been done

Don't hold your breath for me

Because your time was up 

When two became three,

If your going to do that

Then there's no point in me

Holding my breath for you

You lied,

You cheated,

You had your way

And now it's my turn to say...

"Don't hold your breath for me because I wouldn't want to see you pass-out"

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

i really liked the power in this and i can feel how angry and betrayed you must have been. however, i need to mention that you need to be careful of cliche's as upon reading the line "it's too late to apologize" i started singing "it's too laaaaaate" ahah :')

[deeps]

This is wonderful, like this.

[Fire Tulip]

Simply beautiful. :)

[MS. BABy]

Well....this is very passionate..great writing

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

A very passionate message. Well penned.

[Broken Hearted Faux]

Gorgeous. Well written. I love how raw it is as well. You've put feeling into it =)

[nevermindfan1991]

Wow. Another passionate, raw, unequivocal poem. Awesome. You really tell it like it is but write eloquently and beautifully. This was another great poem. I'll be gone for awhile, so I can't wait to read some more of your awesome future poems!

[Pebbles]

love this write well done ....

[Andrea Vargas]

interesting.

[LatoyaEvans]

Very nicely written!

[d]

i like this one a lot. it's flowing nicely and has a nice shape