Don't Hold Your Breath

I think you can figure it out.

Don't hold your breath for me,

Don't waste your time

It's over,

I'm done with you

Its too late to crawl back now,

It's too late to apologize

The damage has already been done

Don't hold your breath for me

Because your time was up 

When two became three,

If your going to do that

Then there's no point in me

Holding my breath for you

You lied,

You cheated,

You had your way

And now it's my turn to say...

"Don't hold your breath for me because I wouldn't want to see you pass-out"

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

i really liked the power in this and i can feel how angry and betrayed you must have been. however, i need to mention that you need to be careful of cliche's as upon reading the line "it's too late to apologize" i started singing "it's too laaaaaate" ahah :')

[Hello, Goodbye]

expressive candid write.. the feeling resonates to personal thoughts of the past..

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem. I like the direct and honest words in this poem. Sometime kindness is not enough. Need hard and strong words to escape a bad person or place. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[GlamGirl]

This is very strong :)

[FallenWingz]

wow i can see my ex saying this to me......cos she sure doesnt want me back anymore...

[Angel Bluestocking]

i love the poem. it's always nice to get inspired.

[Lily Mae]

A great way to vent... xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

wonderful poem.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

:) great job, and an awesome last line!

[Amila Jay]

nice and catchy.. i like the tone of words you have used.