Danger

Danger

A Poem by Daniel Gardner

You are truly in danger
Satan wants your soul
Not your spirit
Your Soul!!!

He will slither up to you
Telling you cunning lies
He destroys your spirit

You will never be the same
He will rip and tear it away
Tear you down

Once your spirit is crushed
Then he takes your life
Your soul
Your breath
Blood
Even your heart

If you let him
If you kneel before him
You proved him right
For that you die

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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Daniel Gardner
Review, Comment, Rate!! I was starting to get real annoyed at everyone saying it needs more imagery. I wrote it how I wanted people to see it. There's a message in it and the message is not imagery.

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Wow, that one actually gave me chills. I think this is my favorite one of yours so far!! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on April 7, 2010
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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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