Super Indeed

Super Indeed

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Mind races a lot and this is what cam out.

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In the depths there are no breaths
In the deep you can not weep
In time you will shine
From the wine you will be divine
With a cape you will not escape
With a blow you will over throw
From their blood you will judge
In the end you will be supreme
With your sword you will win
From the fog you will emerge
In one day you will conquer the world
In your mind you have an immaculate soul
One day at a time you will climb
Your past will not last
Live each day like your last
Super Indeed is your self esteem.

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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Yeah I'm with jeff in that question
and good job


Posted 14 Years Ago


whom did u write this poem about?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thought provoking, not easy to portray these emotions but you have done so really well xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is truthful and so wonderful.
I thought this was amamzing

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love this poem. I'm not really good on picking up the flow and deciding if it's good or not, but I think it is and if other people don't think so then screw them. I like the imagery also. Sorry if I'm repitious, it's midnight and I've gotten very little sleep. Awesome poem yadda yadda yadda.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 25, 2010
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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much.. more..

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