Moonlight Dancer

In the light of the moon

she glides across the ground.

Afraid the night will end soon,

but she still spins ‘round.

She dances from one puddle of light

to the next so elegantly.

The most beautiful thing in sight.

I will wait patiently.

Reviews

[SlightlyOdd]

Nice sweet and short very good

[lebana]

I liked

[ATG]

The imagery in this was great. The poem was very well done and the world choice was pretty good. Overall, a good poem.

[capn_bribri]

i love your poems !! so amazingly done and its always easy to find the rhythm (:
nice job ! keep writing !

[symmetryAsymmetry]

Teasing...so delicate...I'm not gonna read any more poems tonight coz I want this one's effect to linger.. :-)

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully done in so few words