Broken

cant stop thinking about it 
cant stop worrying about it
i cant push my hard any harder
because it was made much lighter
living in a world of broken dreams
where people prey on others dreams
living in a world of cursed souls
where guilty rules
ohh God please time travel me
to fix the things just only once
to fix the past just only once
to fix my life just only once
one day i will win the whole wide world
one day i will change the whole wide world
ohh god please time travel me
to live my dream just only once

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

You express your feelings really well.

[Danny Abner]

thank you....that is so much encouraging

[Najam Us Saher]

You should avoid using short cut words like u. I have read your other poems too in that I've found that you use slang words a lot. Apart from that your poetry is great. ☺

[Danny Abner]

i will keep that in my mind...thank you

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you took my suggestion in a positive way. I thank you :)