Tomorrow In a Bottle

Tomorrow In a Bottle

A Poem by Dannyisawriter
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Don't we have enough to worry about for today? Why worry about tomorrow too?

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The pains of today are coming at me full throttle 
So I'll shove tomorrow in a bottle
And I'll wait for tomorrow 
To drink from its sorrows 
So for today I'll shove tomorrow in a bottle 

© 2014 Dannyisawriter


Author's Note

Dannyisawriter
LOL so I wasn't sure where to go after that I decided to just make it a short poem (like really short)

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Its well written, BUT WHY THE COLOURS DARLING

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dannyisawriter

9 Years Ago

Haha because it looked so boring in all black. Plus it was so short I wanted something to make some .. read more
Riley Justine

9 Years Ago

oh ok makes sense. It's really good though! :)
I love the rhyme in this poem a lot and just the meaning. We all procrastinate and have problems dealing with our struggles and this poem catches this perfectly and elegantly.
Nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dannyisawriter

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
It's the nature of humankind to set worries for the "tomorrow" aside, as if they will somehow resolve themselves.

Posted 9 Years Ago


MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

True. However, I'm not sure the intent was to not plan for the life we must live. I know people who .. read more
Dannyisawriter

9 Years Ago

Well yeah I didn't mean don't plan for tomorrow! But there is a huge difference between planning and.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Very true. :D

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Added on October 10, 2014
Last Updated on October 10, 2014
Tags: tomorrow, worry, bottle, problems, pain

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Any way to use my imagination is my favorite pass time, and writing is my favorite way to express myself. I am unashamed to claim to be a Christian. And I hope that my writing will somehow be a positi.. more..

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