Bloody Knuckles

Bloody Knuckles

A Poem by Dannyisawriter

When I come home with blood on my face


And my knuckles are bloody and broken


Don’t pretend to care of all days


Because you drove me to this with the pain that can no longer be spoken


When I look at the blood on my knuckles


I’m reminded of this month’s torturous struggles


Struggles caused by your inability to be a father


Struggles that cause pain that has no pacifier


But don’t get me wrong, for you I bear no hate


You’re my dad and that’s something I can’t restate 

© 2014 Dannyisawriter


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A bit hard to read with the font and colour, but a really good read. Nicely written

Posted 9 Years Ago


The broken ties between child and parent are a pain that one never quite gets over.

NOTES: I think that longest line should be shortened to help the flow.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 28, 2014
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Any way to use my imagination is my favorite pass time, and writing is my favorite way to express myself. I am unashamed to claim to be a Christian. And I hope that my writing will somehow be a positi.. more..

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