What You Call Insanity

You say I've embraced insanity

Because I accepted Christianity 

Well take my hand and I'll show you another side of humanity

You live a pointless life

Just waiting to die

And I await Kingdom Come

The day all pain is gone

You think this is insanity

Well that's because you choose to ignore the reality

That when you're hurting all on your own

I know I'm not alone

So come to the other side

Where love abides

Once you put life in God's hands

The world will have never tasted more bland

Reviews

[Riley Justine]

Really well done! I just don't quite understand the last line; isn't blandness a bad thing? It sounds as if you are saying once you put your life into the hands of God, your life will become more bland. Otherwise, a really well written piece.

[Dannyisawriter]

It says once you put your life in God's hands the world will taste bland, not God lol! Basically life will be so much better with Him that the world won't have anything to offer

[Riley Justine]

Haha, sorry! I read it weirdly!

[MomzillaNC]

A very well put witness. Blessings and Merry Christmas.

[iveltac]

the last five lines are my favorite. I agree with what your saying. If you don't except Christ your life is points and there is no one to help you when you fall down. But if you believe in Christ he is always there for you. You did excellent work on this poem. Keep up the good work.

[DoormanDan]

You did excellent with rhyming on this one. I loved the first three lines of this poem. Fantastic job!