Love and Death

Love and death only mind,
PeoPle say get over it and try to act kind.

Yet they don't know what's happened in my past,
I was at deaths door! Ok I told at last!

I got this thing in my mind,
I'm not sure if I want it out, I want to search and find.

Love as another thought,
It's like a deadly disease that I've fought.

Ive noticed love and death are so close,
So hard and painful to touch, yet so precious like a rose.

The deadly thought of love and death,
Make me feel lost in the wind and it stole my breath.

It's insane and cruel,
Like a robber without a rule.

So dark and deadly,
So like each other,
What would you rather?

Author's Note

What do u think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Death and life. Sometime they are both needed. Love is a hard thing to control and hold on to. People need to begin love as friends. Passion is like a candle. Fade away with time. Need to talk to the other person and create a life. All of us think about life and death. Best way to look at the question. What would the world be without you? Thank you for the amazing poem. Goal of a writer. To create thoughts with your words. You did.
Coyote

[haleyy(:]

very well wrtten. (: the couplets really fit in well with this poem. (:

[Rainbow Silhouette]

oo il like the entire thing, it really shows the similarity

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

Lol I would too...

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i like that it makes you think about how they are different but also the same...it was a good piece and i would choose death