Perfect Fantasy.

I'm so far....so far from the center of you.

But, you're so close...swimming in the depths of the blue. 

Where did you go, my love?

I'm so worried that you've gone far above.

Such marbled perfection in a beautiful, stainless envelope.

I can't even touch you, while I'm full of longing and hope.

You roll in lies and try to make them stick to your skin.

I try to peel away the layers of sick, but you won't let me in.

Your house is so warm and safe inside of my heart.

But, you don't even know that inside is where you are.

You lay words upon me that I do not deserve.

I'm darker when the lights are on, your kindness is something I should earn.

I sent my trust to you, long ago.

You never sent it back, so I will never go.

I wish my darkness could disappear with my doubt.

I'll hide them, lock them up, and never let them out.

You make me want to meliorate my life.

So, find your courage, and take the knife.

Cut out the darkness from within me.

My evil is what I want you to finally see.

Throw it away, along with your insecurities.

Take my hand, dance with me for eternity. 

Reviews

[Ripple of Aqua]

Wow what a story to tell. I loved the whole idea though it's resolution was a little shaky from middle to end. I really like the picture I revived; a girl standing outside a small ranch home, all of the lights on showing a man hard at work in his office. Very intriguing.

[Rose of Gondor]

This is the perfect Fantasy...............
Perfect Poem. :)

[Daytonight]

My favorite line is the very last! I love the idea of dancing together for eternity. Keep on penning.

[Rae]

I love how your poetry isn't unnescesarily hard to understand. You're straight to the point without being childish. Good job!