Flashback to Perfect Love.

Okay, this is like a poem/story, but since it rhymes I listed it as a poem....but yeah...it's more of a story I guess.

The year was two thousand and ten.

I was so stupid, and I still am.

But, I was at my worst when I truly believed,

I could trust a guy who loved his guitar more then me. 

You know the type I'm speaking of.

The one who all the girls love.

So, when he chooses you, why wouldn't you go for it?

"He's in a band!" "You're so lucky, you stupid b***h,"

They all say......

The one who wears more make-up then I do,

Who would rather get married to iTunes.

The one who thinks his hair is a part of the family.

Knows he's hot so he likes to taunt me.

This was the guy, the one that we all dream about at night.

But when you meet him in real life,

He sucks.

He lies to you, and makes you think he loves you.

He makes you feel so horrible about yourself,

That he's your only source of comfort.

He's the one who'll f**k with your head,

Until you believe you'd be better off dead.

Yes, he was the one I fell for way back when....

Back when I believed he was my friend.

Back when I was much more foolish then now,

But that statement is arguable. 

I'm still pretty damn stupid.

I make a ton of mistakes.

But one I'll never make again...

Is believing reality when it's fake.

Author's Note

This sucks so bad, lol. It's kind of my little....I don't know..rant I guess. Nothing too artistic or poetic about it. XD Ahhh, memories....*cue Barbra Streisand*

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

I... I can relate to this so damn wel..
Wow.... I kind of don't know what to say..
It's so.... relatable..
But I love this piece... it left me with a knowledge... I will never ever make the same mistake as I did back then..
You did an awesome job on this..
Thank you for sharing..

~A Fallen Heroine~

[WindSong]

Your poem speaks from your heart and the truth you discovered the hard way. A very beautiful write!

[Mr Alednac]

dang :O that was really good it didn't suck you trippin :P lol but that was really creative and that guy sounded like a real a*****e! >:O but I really liked this its your own little rant/story/poem very unique!