Prayers in the Night

Wandering soul
in the crimson night
cloaked with thoughts
of an unending time

Prayers of dark fill my sleep
from ravaged angels
painful knots felt within my heart beat
wrap me tight in your wings of rapture

I feel the damp cold breeze
of your wings of flight
taking those prayers
to the full moon light

Turmoil and tears
quench my yearning
hands shake for the prayers of night
ravaged angels truly grip tight

Making fate come alive
with new lands to tread
bringing me gifts
of blackened hearts of dead

No light only dark lives here
twisted in silence
I hear no more
for death has taken me

On a journey once more

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

The entire wording of this poem is marvelous.

[rwar ish me]

this is very good. fillled with darkness, A very nice write

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Painful knots felt within my heart beat wrap me tight in your wings of rapture........lovely piece, a bit dark, but quite lovely.

[Nishant Gupta]

great imagination liked very much , read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[NZane]

Once again, an awesome poem, I liked this one very much. Especially I liked the part with fate, and the start of the poem :)

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I think the best part about this poem is the way the feelings gain strength has the poem progresses. The first stanza is my favorite, and my second favorite is the one that begins with "Making fate comes alive..."
Death takes us all on journeys, and sometimes feelings become overwhelming. This poem does a wonderful job of creating imagery and forcing us to understand the depths of the pain. However, the writer doesn't seem hysterical; the writer seems to be feeling a sort of acceptance, as if you have been here before. This makes it all the more interesting. Good write!

[stars are far]

great write :)

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Great imagery and great write.

[Thea]

Wonderful imagery...
"Making fate come alive
with new lands to tread
bringing me gifts
of blackened hearts of dead"
Very well done poem... :)))

[Sweets]

I love love love this :)
"No light only dark lives here
twisted in silence
I hear no more
for death has taken me"
That's my favorite type of poetry :)
Great work!