A Poem by Dark Beauty

Drum beat of heart
calling to my soul
dances of praise
of once upon a time
I know

Painted faces
songs gushing from heart
listening to the pieces
that have not departed
from my soul

Hearing the echo of the winds
that rejoice
distant memories now
become the noise of drums
connections felt strong and true

Playing the pieces
of the drum beats flow
rapture exists here no more
as I dance in the night sky

Remembrance of my ghost song
so bold and true
beautiful awakening
upon the morning dew

© 2011 Dark Beauty

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Dark Beauty
Rough Draft

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for a rough draft this is great ! amazing piece of work !!(:

Posted 10 Years Ago

I liked it, its awesome

Posted 11 Years Ago

Great work. Well done for a rough draft. Keep on penning.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow captivating to the soul of such meloness of the morning dew. Nice job with description as they painted such an image. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

A pleasing evocation of the past... brought on by the beat of the dram...

Posted 12 Years Ago

Amazing inspiration of a beautiful write that envisions great imagery :)
Beth :3

Posted 12 Years Ago

for a rough draft...this is really good! well...i sincerely dont think you should re write it...its just perfect!

Posted 12 Years Ago

A great start and maybe finish to a wonderful poem. I loved the flow and the underling message as well. I really enjoyed this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago

For a rough draft, it sure is coming out amazing thus far.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Thoroughly enjoying poem, especially the last stanza was very powerful, great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 15, 2011
Last Updated on October 15, 2011


Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ

Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my Thy soul shall fi.. more..

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