A Poem by Dark Beauty

Silver moon light
come and fill my soul
charge me for battle
to endure the death of night

Morbid creatures lurk
closing my eyes they show me
the darkened wrathful vengence
I must endure

Moving within me
capturing the moon light held
no strength to fight
I am forever transformed
into this hellish darkness

Caged by the battle of defeat
a slave to morbid creatures
I have been torn

© 2011 Dark Beauty

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register


boook ! you have to make a boook !! thsi si stupendous its really captivating the poem the flow is really nice i love it !:)100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago

Imma print it aside

Posted 12 Years Ago

I've been here. I can certainly relate to how you must have felt writing this piece. Very well done..

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice narration felt hardly the moonlight strength

Posted 12 Years Ago

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
you always create a haunting melody with your words..

Posted 12 Years Ago

Such a dark battle. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Dark and sinister, you express those feelings that sometimes come of being overwhelmed and crushed,,,

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very dark and well-fitting for Halloween :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love how you capture the darkness of battle in this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is an amazingly expressive poem, able to capture and direct the feeling of defeat on the reader. Even had I not experienced such a feeling in my life, I (and any other reader) is able to percieve your emotion.

Posted 12 Years Ago

First Page first
Previous Page prev
Share This
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


39 Reviews
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on October 14, 2011
Last Updated on October 14, 2011


Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ

Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my Thy soul shall fi.. more..


Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..

Wicked Son Wicked Son

A Poem by Thea