Torn

Torn

A Poem by Dark Beauty

Silver moon light
come and fill my soul
charge me for battle
to endure the death of night

Morbid creatures lurk
closing my eyes they show me
the darkened wrathful vengence
I must endure

Moving within me
capturing the moon light held
no strength to fight
I am forever transformed
into this hellish darkness

Caged by the battle of defeat
a slave to morbid creatures
I have been torn

© 2011 Dark Beauty


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boook ! you have to make a boook !! thsi si stupendous its really captivating the poem the flow is really nice i love it !:)100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


Imma print it aside

Posted 9 Years Ago


I've been here. I can certainly relate to how you must have felt writing this piece. Very well done..


Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice narration felt hardly the moonlight strength

Posted 9 Years Ago


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you always create a haunting melody with your words..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such a dark battle. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dark and sinister, you express those feelings that sometimes come of being overwhelmed and crushed,,,

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very dark and well-fitting for Halloween :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love how you capture the darkness of battle in this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is an amazingly expressive poem, able to capture and direct the feeling of defeat on the reader. Even had I not experienced such a feeling in my life, I (and any other reader) is able to percieve your emotion.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ



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