Breathing Again

Breathing Again

A Poem by DarkRainbowPie
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This poem displays my thoughts on what happens when you die. I believe in reincarnation, so I hope that is apparent through this poem. Enjoy!

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My eyelids peel open,

Darkness.

Where am I?
A pit?

 

My hands reach out.

Wood.

What is this?

My coffin?

 

My ears prick up.

Silence.

Who's there?

No one?

 

I think I'm dead.

But suddenly everything changes.

 

My eyelids peel open.

Bright lights.

Where am I?

A hospital?

 

My hands reach out.

Skin.

What is this?

A person?

 

My ears prick up.

Voices.

Who's there?

My mother.

 

I think I've just been born.

Time to live life again.

© 2013 DarkRainbowPie


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DarkRainbowPie
All feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you! :D

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Having actually seen a ghost I have to believe that there is something beyond this time we all share..I am not a religious man but believe in the power of the human mind.....Your story sort of rings with what I want to believe in..if that makes any sense...I liked it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

8 Years Ago

I'm glad it appealed to you :) Thanks for the review!



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Breathing again...............good one friend kip some length more......just a suggesion

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the good feedback :)
NITHIN PURPLE

8 Years Ago

glad............
Kind of funny, nice poem.... really felt a bit touchy. I love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

8 Years Ago

Haha, thank you :')
I believe in reincarnation too. Though I honestly don't believe it works like you've described, I find this to be an intriguing poem about life and death and life again, and the inquisitive narration is unique and kept my attention. brilliant write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review :)
Lina Grey

8 Years Ago

:)
Having actually seen a ghost I have to believe that there is something beyond this time we all share..I am not a religious man but believe in the power of the human mind.....Your story sort of rings with what I want to believe in..if that makes any sense...I liked it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

8 Years Ago

I'm glad it appealed to you :) Thanks for the review!

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Added on February 24, 2013
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Tags: death, the end, grave, buried, dead, passed away, coffin, new born, baby, life

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DarkRainbowPie
DarkRainbowPie

Dublin, Ireland



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Hey there, guys. My name's Annie, I'm 18, from Ireland. All there is to really know about me is that I am a MASSIVE nerd (...would like to wager that I actually do live and breathe science at .. more..

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