No, you don't have to be my friend.

I wrote this for my friend; Cory Smith: I love you Cory...

No, you don't have to be my friend.

No, you never really had to understand.

No, please just let go of my hand.

Just leave me and my broken heart.

Just like ever-thing else you tore apart.

You were truly always my number one.

Now I sit here bleeding and alone.

If you love him so much then why,

am I the one that makes you cry?



No, you don't have to be my friend.

No, you never really had to understand.

No, please just let go of my hand.

Just know I will always be by your side.

Just now I have died, Committed Suicide.

You were not, or ever, here to save me.

You were with him, now alone with a baby.

Now you see true love was never there.

If you understood the pain he gave me.

Why did you date him, and forsake me?


No, you don't have to be my friend.

No, you never really had to understand.

No, please just let go of my hand.

Just, because of your selfish pride,

you lost him, in a fight, and I died.

Now, you are alone, and you cry,

Tonight, the baby and you both die...


No, you were my very best friend.

No, you always did try to understand.

No, please don't let go of my hand.

Author's Note

This is not sad, this is not a suicide note: I love Cory as a friend and a Sister, I do not like that John Curtis Mason. So if you read this just know, everyone hearts' are always broken, just because of the tears and life that they have took.

Everything is better then Heaven, but it's Always worse then Hell!

Reviews

[Enigma]

This is a great poem. Very well written, indeed. I like the repitition of those three lines and the ending very much. IT flowed with a rhythm in my head, a sad song you might call it.
But definitely, it's an amazing write. So frank, so heart-felt...
Fantastic work!! Keep it up... :)

[We are young.]

hehe very true, everything is always better then heaven, and everything bad is worse then hell. I did have a friend, though, that left me behind, and this reminded me of her.

[revenant21]

I personally think it was sad. But I liked it. Great job.

[unspokenguilt]

Whoa! what a jam packed piece...very WOw a little sad but an AwEsome write!

:)elyssa

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Oh such a heartfelt write...so full of longing and wanting understanding from another that is dear. A true ode to friendship though melancholic in tone. Thank you for sharing your depth of emotion.
Light,
Siddartha

[Flame DM]

very interesting poem. It was sad and grabbed the emotion of wanting someone to let go and then at the last moment changing their mind. A well penned piece

Flame

[by S.D.]

Seems to me like people have to live with their choices and events in their life, bad ones and good ones. But the bad ones can put you on the (hard) road to your Life. And it's so much better to have friends with you.
A very thought-provoking poem.

Keep moving forward, S.D.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

As ironic as this sounds, it's very enlightening. Letting go can be easy, but painful. It happens, though. Great work, buddy. I seriously see your work is progressing very nicely!

Ironically Yours.

[ATG]

Was a very interesting poem. I enjoyed it very much. It was dark, but it seems like a poem about you moving on. It seems like you have stopped caring about her. It seems like that is a good thing. The poem was very well written.