Forgive Me

Pardon my weak poetry

and silly rhymes

and intent to enrich lives, just for a little

Dear Shakespeare 

foreign winds trumpeted in my sails

different times these are , William

Pardon my poetry Soul Reavers

futuristic is my spirit

I fail to die in a deep beauty

A message is what looms me

Pardon me all writers that lived `fore

The spirit of my time is the spirit of a bridge

We breath to string yester` with `morrow

We die in cold spirits

Reviews

[Mara]

So glad I stumbled upon this poem. You truly have a gift. I enjoyed reading this. The word choice was lovely, and the ending Devine.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

I am also so glad that you stumbled upon my poem, Mara, words you used to describe your impression is the reason why I want to master the craft of writing.

[B]

Very nice

I guess you find it hard to release one too many words

I love this

[Satoshi IroTzu]

You seem to keep loving stuff I write.
I find myself to be glad about it ;)

[B]

That is pretty cool

[sunflowerpalette]

I'm loving this line and I don't even know why: "I fail to die in a deep beauty/ A message is what looms me"

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Hello you :)

Long time no see.
I am glad to see that you found somethng for yourself.

[sunflowerpalette]

Yah, I know. *writes this comment while still reading your poem above*