Genetics: Gene-Play

Genetics: Gene-Play

A Poem by Satoshi IroTzu

Luck gifted this woman
though her spirit rested in a filthy gutter
unlucky preys were swallowed by her wicked hunger
She was a lady with a bony face
with unearned ties to the upper class
Luck gifted this man
his soul was robust
shark look and lanky figure
a front-row smile
successful `cause the  sound of trigger
Child out of design spirited in the world
full of passion, lead by desire
an inflamed creature 
the prophet to sweep away
those who must obey them of feature 

© 2015 Satoshi IroTzu


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Hello Satoshi,

Nice poem. Only two remarks:

her`s ---> her
of sound of trigger ---> the sound of a trigger

Regards, Sesame.

@followsesame on Twitter
www.themagiccave.com

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Satoshi IroTzu

8 Years Ago

Much appreciated as always.

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Satoshi IroTzu
Satoshi IroTzu

Split, Splitsko-Dalmatinska Zupanija, Croatia



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