Life

Life

A Poem by Satoshi IroTzu

When you see it coming
act blind and swim

When you start drowning
embrace death , and you will find peace

When you laugh `cause you find it done
Don`t be naive
You are forever in its drum

© 2015 Satoshi IroTzu


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Bravo! A very apt description of the ending of life for someone young who has yet to feel the keeper of time creeping up on you. You must have an old soul that carries the memories of past life's with it and reflects it wisdom in your words :~)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Satoshi IroTzu

8 Years Ago

:)
Life is complex, and I find people in modern day and time thinking from a medieval mind-s.. read more

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Satoshi IroTzu
Satoshi IroTzu

Split, Splitsko-Dalmatinska Zupanija, Croatia



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