Cataclysm

Empty souls swim in riches

Artists in slums lose guidance of shining moon

no saviors for hollow hearts

greed pumps and breeds, plants seeds

world is doomed

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your poetry. Written with a realistic view and thoughts. True words led to true ending. People who seek wealth over life, forget the old dreams are forgotten and doomed. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Satoshi IroTzu]

I appreciate your time you took to read and comment my poem. It`s lovely to see that you are so successful at "Writers Cafe".

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.

[costa siwale]

I love the few but complex words scribed here..it really is an intricate piece. Well done

[Satoshi IroTzu]

I appreciate your honest and informative comment. I hope to hear more of your opinion about my writing.

[costa siwale]

No problem, you are welcome

[Bear]

You wording is fantastic, it has a soulful sound to match their meaning, it is haunting and thought provoking. This one will linger around in my mind for some time contemplating the world's doom :~)

[Satoshi IroTzu]

:) You honor me, Papa-Bear.