Longing for Good Times

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n2mvSpZgRZo

Times slip pass the clutch of our hearts.

In depth of the ideal,

in the strongest flame of our desire,

we lose our minds,

abandon our reason.

Not to blame us so easily,

my detached friend

if you can feel our misery

it'd all be clear to you in The End.

Reviews

[SweetWriter88]

This piece is so true, and it's so powerful because every last line speaks the cold truth. Especially this line; "In the strongest flame of our desire, we lose our mind, abandon our reason". Reading that hit me hard because I know exactly how it feels to desire something so much that you lose all reasoning just to get it. Every word of this poem is filled with the clear view of someone who's been through something and I love it. It's wonderfully written.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect SweetWriter88.

I appreciate your honesty in your comment, and your time you invested in writing such an informative comment.

Happy Living!

[costa siwale]

been away for a while and this is the first poem I have read, Wow! this is an incredible inspiring piece, short, yet deep rooted in expressiveness and allegory. Well done.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Costa Siwale.

I appreciate your time and honesty in your comment.
read moreRespect, Costa Siwale.

I appreciate your time and honesty in your comment.

I am glad that you enjoyed reading this poem, especially that it has been a while for you.

I wish you pleasant return to the site!

[costa siwale]

Thank you, glad to be back.
will definitely read more of your work

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

"Time slipping pass the clutch of our hearts" very powerful and yes time is the only thing we often think about and how to control it. everything we go through or still more to go through, or everything we feel or memories printed in that certain moment it always like you said " Slips pass the clutch of our hearts" ... deep and meaningful. Continue to write. Sincerely your friend in poetry and life.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Andrew Nelson Stewart.

I appreciate your time and honesty that you invested in writing this informative comment.