Dissimulation

Dissimulation

A Poem by Dark Poet
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There's a story in my eyes, It's not the kind you want to hear

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There’s a story in my eyes

It’s not the kind you want to hear

Don’t be surprised when the hero dies

And you’re left calloused with fear

 

Camouflaged by the color of the ocean’s waves

Don’t come too close, you might find out the truth

Instead they are the eclipse of graves

Blinded by the ignorance of youth

 

There’s a story in my eyes

Few have even read

They are too afraid of the character’s disguise

Or maybe it’s what I said

 

A hurricane of endless rain

Don’t let the color fool you

Cherry red bleeds from a vein

It’s not turquoise that is shining through

 

There’s a story in my eyes

It’s not as pleasant as it seems

The cover gives out lies

Hiding my silent screams

© 2014 Dark Poet


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“There’s a story in my eyes
It’s not as pleasant as it seems
The cover gives out lies
Hiding my silent screams”

Hi Dark Poet! Such profound, sombre imagery you’ve painted with outstanding wording. This is truly a poem that reads well. Your message and feelings flow unremittingly through its perfection. Thanks for the share.

W.H.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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We all have a story in our eyes some same some different but there is always a story.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You're coming on as a writer. Keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this piece! Loved the details. Keep Writing! Be You!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

“There’s a story in my eyes
It’s not as pleasant as it seems
The cover gives out lies
Hiding my silent screams”

Hi Dark Poet! Such profound, sombre imagery you’ve painted with outstanding wording. This is truly a poem that reads well. Your message and feelings flow unremittingly through its perfection. Thanks for the share.

W.H.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job with the rhymes and the theme of the poem! The second stanza is my favorite I must say!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a wonderful poem and I laughed when I read the first stanza!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 15, 2014
Last Updated on July 16, 2014
Tags: eyes, color, depression, dark, sad

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