Life is like a flower

Life is like a flower,

Delicate yet sweet.

 

One day you're as magnificent as can be,

Taking in everything you see.

The next day you're a nobody,

Down on one knee.

 

But don't get twisted,

And don't loll about.

Just look to the sky,

And let it all out.

Author's Note

This is my first poem. I'm not very good at poetry so if I didn't do well, tell me.

Reviews

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Aaaah! You make the sky in this poem sound so lovely and refreshing. :D Great read!

[WindSong]

This is very appealing with nice rhyme and rhythm. Good poem!

WindSong

[ToxicMelody]

I would have never guessed that this was your first poem! I like the way it rhymes and the message that you're getting across is wonderful. The way you portray the poem is amazing. I like this a lot! Bravo!

[007Sue]

darksummerswind this is fresh and delightful