#~eLeMeNtAl pAiN~#

#~eLeMeNtAl pAiN~#

A Poem by Dawn
"

jus a poem i wrote when i was mad

"

 

The flower
 
There are billions of stars
Yet I am not one of them
A cynical flower bent slightly at the stem
Hanging o’er the bank of the river
Wishing there was someone to deliver…
It from its misery
 
A flower that thrives in the heat and the light
A flower that can bring joy and delight
A flower that blooms in the day and sleeps at night
Is now o’er come by melancholy
Closes its petals and withdraws in self pity
For it senses a change in the wind
 
There is an ominous darkness in the sky
The flower silently asks itself why
It had been left on this earth at nature’s mercy
Susceptible to her every whim and fancy
As the rain fell over it like tiny pieces of glass
The flower wondered if its time had come at last
But even the worst things have to past
 
The shower became a dazzling drizzle
Like silver falling from the sky
The flower glimpsed the sun coming out from behind the clouds
And expressed its relief in a sigh
As it opened its beautiful petals and embraced the cool air
And in that surreal moment
The flower knew why it was there.

© 2008 Dawn


Author's Note

Dawn
hmm just write what you think Thanks!!!

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~I really like this poem... it made me smile at the end:)
perhaps a flower is more illuminating than a star....

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Dawn
Dawn

Valsayn, TX, Trinidad and Tobago



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I am like a divalicious nerd, i say that because I could relate to divas and cheerleaders and girlie girls becuase i love shopping and other stuff and i could talk to nerds because i love reading and .. more..

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A Poem by Dawn