Time

Life comes in two parts: happiness in sleep, and truth when awake.

Alarm clock,

Why do you sing?

Why don't you answer?

Are you fine?

Again,

You woke me up late...

...thought I was falling...

...deep into love.

My friend, 

I don't love you when

You live up to this.

Know, something's amiss.

Again, 

You tell me to wake, 

It's too much to take:

These moments I miss.

Will you promise to wake me 

Insofar as I 

Remember to give you your time?

Author's Note

Please point out both any positives or negatives with this piece. No error too small, so go ahead.

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Time tough concept, to nail down, it folds so slow in my mind, then I still have Christmas lights to take down, I refuse Reunions who would want to erase all the young girls your age in my head. Me Me....the poem is good but the first I have read of yours so can't measure much.

[Shy]

Very interesting comparison
Open to interpretation
Cool in general
Good poem =P

[Moving Mass]

This poem wasn't very thought out though, just what I felt haha, but thanks!