The Girl Who Came from the Moon

The Girl Who Came from the Moon

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

I noticed the glow through my window-pane,

A glow, set deep in the wood,

I thought that it might be a tree on fire

And it didn’t enhance my mood,

I took the jeep, an extinguisher,

And stuck to the well worn trail,

My headlights picked out a wreck of a car

Ablaze, and a girl, quite pale.

 

Beyond the car was a meteorite

That glowed and pulsed in the dark,

The girl stood shivering, next to a tree

Reached out, and picked at the bark,

She wore a jacket of silver thread

That was scorched, and torn at the seams,

‘So this is the place that the Master said,

A planet, cocooned in dreams!’

 

I thought she was probably quite deranged

And helped her into the jeep,

Her form was slender and angular

And she promptly fell asleep,

I doused the fire in the burning wreck

But the meteorite still glowed,

Buried quite deep in the undergrowth

It was only the top that showed.

 

I sprayed it all with a burst of foam

But the foam dispersed in the air,

It floated away like candy floss,

The kind you see at the fair,

I turned and made for the Willy’s Jeep

And raced back out on the track,

I don’t know why, but a shiver ran

From my neck to the small of my back.

 

Back at the house she looked around

And a smile lit up her face,

‘So this is the place you hide at night,

From the monsters, deep in space!’

Her cheekbones were quite angular

And her forehead broad and square,

But the feature most that startled me

Was the sheen of her silver hair.

 

It fell straight down to her shoulders, swept

Around like a silver bowl,

And looked much more like a helmet, set

For it didn’t move at all,

‘We’d better see where you’re from,’ I said,

‘Your folks will be worried soon.’

She laughed, a tinkling bell-like sound,

‘I just dropped in from the Moon!’

 

I thought, ‘Oh yes, here’s a likely one,

Perhaps she should be restrained?’

The shock of the car and the meteorite

Had rendered her quite deranged.

‘I came to warn you, the Argonauts

Are waiting, up in the sky,

When Pluto enters Aquarius

They will come, and your race will die!’

 

I settled her down to sleep the night,

In the morning she was gone,

But out in the woods there were flashing lights

And cars and trucks in a swarm,

There were Police and Special Agents there

And the Army in full force,

While standing silent, watching them there

Was a grey and silver horse.

 

It watched as a truck had pulled away

With a globe strapped under a tarp,

A bevy of Military Police were there,

By now, it was almost dark,

Then the horse looked back and it stared at me

And I noticed the silver mane,

That swept down over its shoulders

As it cantered off, in the rain.

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2012 David Lewis Paget


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I don't know how you are able to make the most beautiful poems out of everything you write, but I hope someday I will be able to do the same! It flows perfectly off the tongue and it has very vivid imagery that I really enjoy. Especially the horse at the end - lol. Thank you for writing this!

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Sir, it has been a real joy reading your work.

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Well I see your imagination is running wild.I imagine that is where the tales of the unicorn came from .Folklore mixed with wild imaginings .Do they have a common thread of truth from our past?

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And once again left in a quandary... is it the storytelling or the poetry that brings me back?

Excellence again, Mr. Paget!

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David..this one was so interesting..I wasn't sure just how it would end..but like you always do..you brought on a smashing ending..I wisah I had half of your talent..Just keep them coming..lovee and God bless Lyn and you..Kathie

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This is most excellent, a great tale as well as a smooth read :)

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What a delightful tail with a touch of mystery and foreboding. I love how she conformed to the needed form to blend in. Don't worry though. Mankind will wipe itself out long before the Argonauts arrive!

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What a lovely journey and a beautiful end.

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Deep levels of story here...the threat to the humn race...the girl...the silver maned horse...lovely to read...

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once again, I enjoyed this poem. Loved the ending lines,

Then the horse looked back and it stared at me
And I noticed the silver mane,
That swept down over its shoulders
As it cantered off, in the rain.

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I so enjoy receiving your reading requests! Each poem captures the reader (me!) in an amazing story that is always a fantastic journey. -pat

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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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