Out of Time!

Out of Time!

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

The Moon was rising, over the hill

Along with the evening star,

They lit the lane he was walking, ‘til

He could see the lights of a car,

They were headed up in the narrow lane

So he had to jump out wide,

Then it hurtled over the flowing rill,

Rolled, and lay on its side.

 

He stood in shock for a moment there

Then ran to do what he could,

But flames burst out of the tangled wreck

At the edge of McNalty’s Wood.

He heard a woman, screaming in pain

Who was trapped inside the car,

But the tank blew up, as he knew it would

So he watched it, from afar.

 

The door on top of the wreck flew up

As the air began to scorch,

The woman climbed from the burning wreck

But was lit like a flaming torch,

She stood engulfed for a moment there

As the flames devoured her hair,

And screamed, ‘I’m coming to get you, John,

In the dead of the night, beware!’

 

Then all he saw was a staring skull

As the flesh peeled off the bone,

The body shuddered, and then collapsed

As he turned, and ran for home.

His heart was pounding a steady beat

As he ran, and stumbled there,

The voice that rang in his ears was shrill,

‘In the dead of the night, beware!’

 

He knew the woman, he knew the car

And a terror entered his soul,

He’d left her stood at the altar, while

He hid in his coward’s hole,

He’d packed his bag, and travelling things

While her father stood at the door,

Loading a pair of cartridges

And sworn to even the score.

 

He’d left the town in the dead of night

Had driven a hundred miles,

Buried himself in the countryside

In a shack called ‘Seven Dials’.

There were seven clocks in the tiny shack

That would tick and tock in turn,

They each were named for a crying shame

And the seventh clock was ‘Burn.’

 

The first was named ‘Disloyalty’

And the second ‘Coward’s Toll’,

The third had hands but a vacant face

And its name was ‘Empty Soul.’

The fourth had written across its face

A single wording, ‘Scare!’

The fifth was draped in a veil of lace

With the only word, ‘Despair.’

 

He thought of stopping the ticking clocks

But they ticked on through the night,

He’d wake up drenched in a sweat, and when

He rose, his face was white,

The sixth clock hung in the kitchen, was

The only clock to chime,

But then would lock, the ticking stop

While the name said, ‘Out of time!’

 

He lay low after the burning car

Would not go out for a week,

He locked the doors and the windows,

Every night, but took a peek,

The world outside by the darkened wood

Was a place to chill and scare,

The wind would whisper among the trees,

‘In the dead of the night, beware!’

 

A month went by, they buried the corpse

That they found by the burnt out car,

He thought he’d beaten the woman’s curse

So he left the door ajar,

A gale blew up and it swung the door

Out wide in the dead of night,

And a shape appeared in the doorway

As he woke in a sudden fright.

 

She seemed to shimmer while standing there

In a charred silk wedding dress,

‘You didn’t think you’d escape me now

That you’ve left me such a mess,’

A breeze had lifted her veil by then

There was just a moment’s lull,

Then he stared at her and she stared right back

From a charred and blackened skull.

 

He screamed as only a man can scream

When the terror eats his soul,

A flame burst out of the wedding dress

And devoured the woman whole,

The shack went up and the ticking stopped

Of the first six dials in turn,

But above the crackle of flames he heard

That last clock ticking, ‘Burn!’

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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Oh wow David, what an awesome tale! Your mind never stops ticking with inspiration for your poems. There is always a message within your verse and this is no exception. Revenge always has a deadly cost when one has felt wronged.
As always, amazing flow, rhyme and story. Brilliant!

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Wow! This one is lengthy but extremely engaging. I think Poe has been reincarnated in your bones and he speaks through your poetry. What a great, great story - full of imagination.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a formidable tale of horror and if you believe in it Karmic Justice. Riveting. I shuddered as I read it.

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This is one even the great Dennis Wheatley would be proud of, a riveting story from beginning to end, the hairs on the back of my neck are still standing !

Splendid David, really enjoyed this horror story of revenge and just retribution !

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Excellent job, you've done it again. Read ever good review here (Which should be all) and you will find my good comments near.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply amazing! What a journey you take the reader on.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh what woes we have when we seek revenge on those who've hurt us...

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh wow David, what an awesome tale! Your mind never stops ticking with inspiration for your poems. There is always a message within your verse and this is no exception. Revenge always has a deadly cost when one has felt wronged.
As always, amazing flow, rhyme and story. Brilliant!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great story of vengeance and vindiction. I love the ticking clocks with their ghostly names.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish my poem flowed that well!! Another stunner from you David!

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TrimarcoRansome

10 Years Ago

Brilliant story too!

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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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