A Vibrant Picture Outlined In Bold Black

Dying leaves bend to the will of the wind from the new season

And fall silently onto the ground, making a golden

bundle of etiolated carcasses also known as a childs playpen.

As the leaves fall, the trees are left bare and tarnished,

The desolate boughs breathe in deaths hushed

whispers, carried through the winds sharp, cold, cuts.

The pointy trees and dead leaves birth forward

an artistic inspiration that can only be seen and not captured

 on a canvas to be hung and forever admired or pictured.

As the world turns, and seasons fall into the vibrancy of natures silence,

And the rhythm of the falling leaves sing to the seasons cadence.

Autumns beautiful death will bring Winters frozen presence.

Author's Note

Please, Just be honest

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

I'll be honest .... this is beautiful!

[A. L. Allen]

I love this piece. I love the silence of winter, and you've captured it beautifully. I like how you used "the vibrancy of nature's silence". Very unique and original.

Great job!

[unknown]

Enjoyed it. It was a great description about the end of autumn/fall and the beginning of winter. Excellent imagery.

[Ruth]

All seems so sterile in this season, so removed of empathy..you have captured that nicely :) Lovely work here xoxo

[Larry Dyson]

this is missing something?...I understand you are referring to the leaves as Etiolated carcasses.. but the playpen is not the subject.. add a word or two correctly?nice phrasing except for this overlook..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You captured the beauty of change.
I welcome such change with your influence.
Beautiful imagery.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very nice piece. I like how you used a word that I was unfamiliar with to make such a statement. I now know what etiolation is. Great work.

[Roe]

i thought the flow of it was great very descriptive writing i like it

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was very imaginary...it captured a picture that the reader could see and feel ...it flowed wonderfully and the stanzas were perfectly written and placed ...AMAZING

[Bryan Micheni]

I like the depiction and imagery:-) very good write:-)