A Vibrant Picture Outlined In Bold Black

A Vibrant Picture Outlined In Bold Black

A Poem by DearSweetAgony

Dying leaves bend to the will of the wind from the new season
And fall silently onto the ground, making a golden
bundle of etiolated carcasses also known as a childs playpen.

As the leaves fall, the trees are left bare and tarnished,
The desolate boughs breathe in deaths hushed
whispers, carried through the winds sharp, cold, cuts.

The pointy trees and dead leaves birth forward
an artistic inspiration that can only be seen and not captured
 on a canvas to be hung and forever admired or pictured.

As the world turns, and seasons fall into the vibrancy of natures silence,
And the rhythm of the falling leaves sing to the seasons cadence.
Autumns beautiful death will bring Winters frozen presence.

© 2011 DearSweetAgony


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I'll be honest .... this is beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this piece. I love the silence of winter, and you've captured it beautifully. I like how you used "the vibrancy of nature's silence". Very unique and original.

Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Enjoyed it. It was a great description about the end of autumn/fall and the beginning of winter. Excellent imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


All seems so sterile in this season, so removed of empathy..you have captured that nicely :) Lovely work here xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is missing something?...I understand you are referring to the leaves as Etiolated carcasses.. but the playpen is not the subject.. add a word or two correctly?nice phrasing except for this overlook..

Posted 9 Years Ago


You captured the beauty of change.
I welcome such change with your influence.
Beautiful imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice piece. I like how you used a word that I was unfamiliar with to make such a statement. I now know what etiolation is. Great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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i thought the flow of it was great very descriptive writing i like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


this was very imaginary...it captured a picture that the reader could see and feel ...it flowed wonderfully and the stanzas were perfectly written and placed ...AMAZING

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the depiction and imagery:-) very good write:-)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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