Forget To Forget Me Not

Forget To Forget Me Not

A Poem by DearSweetAgony

In changing date and time you'll lose my face
in the crepuscular depths of your failing recollections.
As my life is scattered by the winds frigid embrace
 My memory becomes a translucent breeze, to blow away the burden
of you forgetting my name. But now it makes no difference,
I'm gone from your pondering mind--
Without anyone noticing my absence.

In changing date and time,
 You'll slowly morph into the man of your endeavors.
And you'll smile in all of your pictures, as they transform into memories
That you admire, and remember, and hold dear to your heart...forever.
  While I'll be suspended on your tongue as you utter similarities
to my name, But not one word remembers me.
So I'll lay amongst the dead trees and I'll purposely forget to remind
You of my name and face as I fade,
 and you change like the date and time. 

© 2011 DearSweetAgony


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i love this poem i can relate to it very well. the name you've chosen for the poem is very creative also :) hope to read more of your future poems

Posted 9 Years Ago


Powerful stuff.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Your choice of vocabulary, and your sentence structure are amazing, and the rhyme scheme flows very well with said structure. I've enjoyed this piece of writing, keep up the good work. :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love your writing, have i said that? Very talented. i very much enjoyed this and can certainly relate to it as well. Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


great choice of words,very effective!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I gathered quite a sad tone to this piece, expressed very well, i'm sure this is exactly how it is when one changes and moves on, we become forgotten to an extent. Great poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Wow i really likes this i loveeeeeee the last line

Posted 9 Years Ago


the feeling of loss and change is what is revealed to me... i really like this poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


'So I'll lay amongst the dead trees'

great perspective on lost love, liked the original angle, the images sensitive and welldrawn :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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