People F**k

People F**k

A Poem by Dee Oddbins
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observations

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The noiseless faces
   of the grimacing stud,
    the oohs and aahs
       or the innocent blood,
         The screams and shouts
          of another extreme,
            are the ins and outs
              of the coming dream,

The sleaze and grime
  that surrounds our food,
    are all that's left
      of the not so good,
        the bleeding wrists
          in the finished game,
            are all that's left
              of the not the same,

The paranoid eyes 
  at the public bar,
    are the folding thoughts
      but they never are ...
          
      

© 2020 Dee Oddbins


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I like this form and structure cause it's force to my eyes to read in enormous speed.

Title it self pointing on dark nature of human ape called human.

Lately i watched lot of documentaries on social behaviour Apes . They tactic to conquer territory of another apes. They are very cruel and they killing even little ones who was just born. On other hand they are able to help each other at very risk situations. Hmmm that's sounds like humans to me .

Very good graphic imagination. You really present reality like creepy wonderful poem. well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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