I Am Womanly!

I Am Womanly!

A Poem by Donni
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I was inspired by Maya Angelou's Phenominal Woman poem....

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I am womanly
to the very marrow of my bones
my curves defy the trends
I am the embodiment of poetry of the ancients
I am a muse to the God of Plenty.

I am womanly
silken skin drapes across my
ample bosom, hips and thighs
I celebrate my luxurious form,
the line of my back is Divine!

I am Womanly
the temptation of Adam
a succulent fruit
that will quench the thirst
and create a hunger.


 

© 2009 Donni


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Oh this was so nice ..
I am womanly..right to the bones
my body defy all forms
i am poetry of ancients
a muse to God of plenty
silken skin ample bosom
hips and thighs ,those will never lie
line of my back,just so divine
was always temptation to Adam
his eternal fruit,will quench his thirst
and make him ever hungry again
all (Eve) what lovely write,you put history of creation in a few words
Eve herself will wonder if she is really all that ,ha ha
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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beautiful


Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is a bit too self-absorbed for my tastes. It would work if the references were Narcissus staring into the pool rather than the Biblical Eve.

~enzo


Posted 13 Years Ago


Very confident as a woman and a writer,
I like it
Well done


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this was so nice ..
I am womanly..right to the bones
my body defy all forms
i am poetry of ancients
a muse to God of plenty
silken skin ample bosom
hips and thighs ,those will never lie
line of my back,just so divine
was always temptation to Adam
his eternal fruit,will quench his thirst
and make him ever hungry again
all (Eve) what lovely write,you put history of creation in a few words
Eve herself will wonder if she is really all that ,ha ha
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one is awesome! bravo times two. It is nothing more enjoyable than a person embracing their confidence and beauty. All your visuals bring out moans in all of us, nicely done. This is my favorite of yours.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the self confidence of this piece

silken skin drapes across my
ample bosom, hips and thighs
I celebrate my luxurious form,

Bravo... I am tired of society telling everyone that you need to be stick thin... I real woman has curves...
Be proud of who you are for in the end that is what matters.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Donni
Donni

Largo, FL



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Can I write? Yes. But can I write well? Probably not, but I will continue to work at it, because I love the written word- or well written words strung together to convey a great thought. I don't edit.. more..

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