Lonesome

Two haiku's written out of boredom.

Left here all alone
My thoughts begin to wander
But you just ignore

If this is the end
What is wrong with pretending
Let me be happy

Reviews

[Ryan Gonzalez]

This is a nice poem. I like how you use the haiku format very well and actually the thought throughout it is consistent. I also like how the end has a sense of gloom with a tint of happy. It makes the reader think what they should pretend about and why someone is trying to make them pretend. Just keep up the good work!