The Man

Just something i wrote a while ago about how I'd like myself and others to be represented.

A man is not measured by his age, size nor his strength. A man is measured by his integrity and for how he overcomes obstacles put in front of him. Tolerance is key, because the second you are impatient with some one who is in the stages of learning what he or she wants to do, you are no longer a man. Childish things should not cross your mind. So i say to everyone, be a man. Hold your head high, and if you ever doubt yourself, take a step back to analyze what you have.

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[sherwin]

I liked the beginning, but you kinda lost me with "childish things should not cross your mind," what kind of childish things are you refering to? But otherwise good attempt keep it up! :)