Unnoticed

Sometimes it seems as though no one is really there for you.

I walk alone

lost in the seas of faces

hidden by their shadows

unnoticed and unloved

 

I continue through life

hurt and betrayed

by the ones that love

and hate me the most

 

I wonder if life

had any real worth

or if I should die

to stop all the lies

 

I lay upon my bed

crying for help

for just one person

to care about me

 

I watch as my tears

mix in with my blood

as I end all the suffering

so deep in my heart

 

I tremble with fear

as I become so numb

my eyes lose their sight

when I fall to the ground

Author's Note

I'd love to know what you think on this... *note: this is not about me*

Reviews

[Wildfleour]

Wondered ---- wonder (keep to the same tense)

I think you should take out "and" in the 4th stanza

This is very sad and what is even sadder is that so many people feel this extreme sense of lonliness and just choose to give up.

[Phoenix Alleena]

This is one of those that makes you feel
sad when you read them. =(
I wish I could hug the character,
so they know that not everyone's all bad.

[Poeticpiers]

This is a desperate cry for help.I only poetic license Everyone feels like this at some stage of their lives.But why should anyone care do you care for them? or are you wrapped up in your own misery you don't have time for others. You should get out more