She Hurts

She Hurts

A Poem by .Because.I.Said.So.

That girl you see
Her life as hurtful as it can be
Every night she cuts
Everyone calls her an emo s**t
Every week she drinks to ease the pain
She's tied to her life by horrible chains
But you see her at school
Happy, safe, secure
She dreams of a person who understands her hurt
But no one shows them love, so there's blood on her shirt
"Help me! Help me!" she screams at night
Her parents don't know, they've gone in flight
But then one day, there came another
One she treated like more than a brother
He kissed her scars, and told her to stop
She no longer had to face the cops
She stopped her drinking, no longer cut
Her heart, she no longer had to shut
She loved him, he loved her
Forever and ever, they'll be together

© 2013 .Because.I.Said.So.

Author's Note

This is my dream :)

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Great rhyme, smooth darkness all along with the light at the end of the tunnel. I like to see from time to time a happy ending, and I'm glad I've seen yours.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like the repetition used.
It creates a profound impact.
I love the positive end.
Optimism is what makes my day.
And sometimes, all we need is one person, one single person, to lift us out of our give us hope..
I dont know about the 'forever love'..but i do believe that some people teach you to love yourselves..and that is more permanent.

An amazing write.
Loved it. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

What's your dream? Finding your love or ending your pain from your love? Nevermind. Anyway, I like it, it had cool flow.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on May 8, 2012
Last Updated on September 1, 2013
Tags: cutting, depression, saved, love, pain, happy ending, happy



Kanab, UT, UT

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