The lost sparkle

Have you ever fallen, its time to get back up.

Once was it when everything was bright,
You walked tall in the cream of life,
You control a whole lot and held power,
And you've forgotten nothing last forever,
then little problems crawls into your life,
And they left it in pieces -as in shattered,
So now you lost your whole life sparkle,
And you think you've lost the battle,
So there you are just like a periwinkle,
slow and steady just the way it moves,
You'd never thought You'd recover so soon,
But then you blend the wriggles and the struggles,
And then you made away from your coming doom,
And that was just the magic so good,
And finally you found the lost sparkle.

Reviews

[Ry]

Very nice =) I like when poetry has happy endings and isn't completely filled with darkness and gloom. Nicely written =) A little tip though... "-as in shattered" throws the flow off a little bit. Very well done. -Eli

[Mikki Ciezki]

Love it!!! =]

[Dev]

Really well written. Something everyone can relate to. Ups and Downs in life happen. We just need to have inner conviction !!

[An owl on the moon]

This is such an uplifting write, and very easy to relate too. We all experience those times of loss or discouragement. Thank you for giving us a hope to endure and keep going!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we go down the wrong road and bad decision. Lose our way. Take a small light of hope to lead us back. A excellent poem. I like it all. Ending made it perfect.
Coyote

[ArchAngeL009]

An undoubtedly decent piece of work, I wonder what the title is.